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Shadow The Hedgehog: Agent of G.U.N.

Clean Up Act 1 part 1


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Reply Tomcat_X, July 2nd, 2017, 9:30 pm

THE KING IS DEAD, LONG LIVE THE KING!

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Discussion:

Reply AtmaD12, July 2nd, 2017, 9:36 pm

It's not the flimsiest excuse for a sprite upgrade I've seen!

Reply Lugbzurg, July 6th, 2017, 1:48 am

Alright... I think maybe it's getting better, but do make sure you pay close attention to the sense of flow you place with the speech balloons, so the reader's eye flows across the panels naturally, instead of darting all over the place. There should never be confusion as to when what is being said when... unless confusion or overlapping conversations is something that's intentionally being conveyed.

Also, what exactly are you using here? I thought I read a mention of Microsoft Paint, but I'm not certain if that was the main tool. Are you familiar with GIMP?
https://www.gimp.org/
It's free... Basically free PhotoShop, though a lot easier to use. I've been using it to produce comics for years, even Sonic sprite comics. You'd be able to quite easily apply things like curved tails on the speech balloons, transparent dropshadows and other cool effects to really make the visuals pop.

Reply Tomcat_X, July 9th, 2017, 10:38 pm

@Lugbzurg: I went back to using Photoshop. Also I am aware how comics work.

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